story

OK, I'm writing a story and I thought it would be fun to post the prologue. So far the story is seven pages. But I'm not going to give you those. Just the prologue. Hope you think it's cool!

A short stout man trudged through the foggy streets in London; he had an appointment and didn’t plan to be late. The man wore a long black trench coat with a midnight black hat glimmering with little raindrops. He stayed in dark alleys, alert for any sign of movement. His bulging eyes were quick to spot another man. 

“Do you have it?” The stout man questioned devilishly as he glanced at his surroundings.  

The other man was in a cloak, his deep-set eyes crimson red, with a scar across one. His teeth were stained a mustard color, which was seen in his vile grin; an unpleasant odor circled him. The stout man was impatient, “Hurry up!” he growled.

There was a faint grunt as the stout man fell; the cloaked man stood over his victim. “You foolish fiend,” his slick voice echoed, “get rid of the body.”  Black shadows leaped from the encircling buildings. 

Yes if you like it I actually have an editor. She is an english teacher(Sister Grambo) when I asked her if she would do it, she was totally willing. If there is anybody who LOVES to write and wants to learn some cool stuff, May I suggest 'writing magic' the author Gail Carson Levine( has written some really good books in my opinion) Ella Enchanted, Fairest, Dave at night ect. so if you want to learn about writing MORE the book has really fun activities you do with writing that help make the book awesome. Definitely go for writing magic it's amazing!